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哪位英语高人帮忙把这段话修改一下

Home is not a house, is not a bed, is not a table for the meal. Home is a await, is a hope,is the feeling at ease, is the eyes that full of the love, or the shoulder let you have a rest...
If you meet the Ms.Right, you don't mind the home where is it.

我英语比较烂,估计语法很多错误.哪位帮个忙,谢谢.略做改动也OK的.

<P>先声明一下,我也很烂,不过跟老接触多了,就知道 其实语言就是让人理解地,美国人英国人什么地肯定能看懂这些话, 对着日本法国德国就有点麻烦了</P>
<P>我先乱改了改,等YUNG或者SS或者文秘或者无敌什么地包</P>
<P>Home doesn't mean a house,  a bed, or a table just for meal. It is awaiting, is hope,is easy feeling, is the eyes full of  love, or the shoulder you can lean at... </P>
<P>If you meet the right one, you won't mind where it is .  这个好象应该用虚拟语气,我都忘了<BR></P>

<P>home is not just a house, a bed, or a table with meals, it a hope that awaits, a love that fills, a caddle you can rest in, a shoulder you can cry on.</P>
<P>if you meet the right one, you dont care where it is.</P>

<P>言身改得挺好。</P>

<P>其实我觉得你的原文有些语句不通， 我是说意思上， 不是语法。</P>

<P>yung接着来</P>

<P>yanshen写的蛮好的，其实要想贴切只有英语国家的人改才行。我怀疑law想表达的中文意思英语国家的人可能不能理解。</P>
<P>对了，law除了把动词当名词用以外，其他还说得过去。</P>

<P>后来我算明白了, 楼主果然不是LAW...</P>

是哪个？？？？

是苗苗!            

<P>Due to unknown reasons, neither I can't log in at home, nor I can't type Chinese at school.....</P>
<P>how about posting in cpgl or chatting on msn/aim? =_=;</P>

<P>Home is not a house, is not a bed, is not a table for the meal. Home is a await, is a hope,is the feeling at ease, is the eyes that full of the love, or the shoulder let you have a rest... <BR>If you meet the Ms.Right, you don't mind the home where is it. </P>
<P>家には唯の屋敷ではない；ベッドにもない；食卓にもない。</P>
<P>家は待つ場所だ。 </P>
<P>希望だわ。</P>
<P>安心な感じをしているんだ。</P>
<P>溢れている愛しさの瞳だけど、</P>
<P>君にちょっと泊め休ませている僕/アタシの肩かも。。。</P>
<P>もしミストライトに逢うことになったら、家は何処でもいいんだな。</P>
<P>"還是希望law/ning/miaomiao能放上中文原文﹐這樣才能了解你真正想表達的意思。"</P>
<P>A home is not a house; neither just a bed; nor merely a dinner table.</P>
<P>It is the process of waiting/enduring,the hope,the worry-free feeling,the overflowing love in the eyes, or the arms you may cuddle with/the shoulders you can lean on...</P>
<P>If you've met your Mr./Miss Right, you won't mind where the home is...</P>

<P>楼上的头像到底是啥?????????/</P>

<STRONG><FONT face=Verdana color=#61b713>爱神エロり  是部电影  </FONT></STRONG>

苗苗是哪个？

<P>好象是女人</P>

[quote][b]以下是引用[I]Gxx[/I]在2006-1-12 11:46:51的发言：[/b]<br><STRONG><FONT face=Verdana color=#61b713>爱神エロり  是部电影  </FONT></STRONG>[/QUOTE]
錯。。。不是那個。。。你個死G姐~討厭啦
[align=right][color=#000066][此贴子已经被作者于2006-1-15 18:31:25编辑过][/color][/align]

楼上的 ，<FONT face=Verdana color=#61b713>爱神エロり  不是AV吧   我看女主角身段蛮差的 脱 不脱都一样</FONT>

[quote][b]以下是引用[I]jinwyp[/I]在2006-1-12 9:27:15的发言：[/b][BR]<P>楼上的头像到底是啥?????????/</P>[/QUOTE]